Xanadu and Kubla Khan
water from naiads and
Danaids everywhere
nor any swap to sync
What are words worth when
lilacs bloom through dooryards into their doom,
measured out
in coffin swoons?
Few flee nor wait for free
parking, lots to be
diced for
in linen, losing to
the house always wins.
Unctuous grins
prefacing
sales pitches out of bounds,
daffodils laughing,
algorithms graphing:
…and the wind ignored the rain, blowing through it like betrayal,
horizontal, dry between the
drops
in the red shadow
of shock.
Author note: I drew image and partial sound patterns from Coleridge, Wordsworth, Whitman, Shakespeare, Cummings, and Eliot, playing with language and meter with intentional enjambment (which I have as much of a thing for as some do for end rhyme). I like to break lines to emphasize words and ideas, and I firmly believe that rhyme is most powerful internally or as an echo, rhyming with the line from the canon that I’m attempting to call to the reader’s mind. I hope it lands and succeeds.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
Ekke Ekke Ekke Ekke Ptang Zoo Boing!
Intrusive rhyme bothers me, except as a weapon.
Intertextuality is my passion.
Formalist/ New Critical are my guiding theories.
My words are mine, not a robot’s.
MA English literature, CofC
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