Rolling Eclipse
An In Eclipse Acrostic Challenge Poem
Eclipse comes, lingering, interrupting planets' steady exercises; enter
Crescent layers, inching, providing surprisingly exciting exhibition; crafty
Light is partial; Sun's encroached entrance cracking, letting
In pieces, shafts easing, edging, creeping lightly, inching
Perfectly so Eternity exposes Creation's little intricacies playfully.
Sun emerges, expectantly, coin-rolling like it's performing spectacle!
Entranced, exhilarated: circular luminescence is propitiously secured.
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Comments (23)
I knew I missed some eclipse entries for a few days and boy did I miss out on this one! Congrats, Rachel! Absolutely brilliant!
Can't believe I missed this one, it's awesome! Now EVERYONE can see it and you can shout it from the rooftops Rachel. Congratulations!
OMG... This is aos clever!! Congrats on your win Rachel!!! Well done!!
Congrats Rachel! I missed this one too. Well done! Caught it on your other page today! 😊👍
Well, there you go, Chum. Congrats! Cannot believe I missed this - crafty Rachel, crafty, and whimsy!
Congratulations on your win!! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations!! So glad I found this entry!
I can't believe I missed this one! Brilliant...congratulations :)
Congratulations!!! 🥳
Congrats 👏👏
Incredible and congratulations on your win Rachel
So creative!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
Clever work, congrats!
How did I miss this! Brilliant, congratulations.
What a creative and intricate approach.
wow amazing!!!!
Wow!! You’re such a clever and inventive writer.
Oh my goodness Rach, you blew my mind with what you did here! Whoaaaa!! I know it wouldn't have been easy to do this but you executed it so brilliantly! Well done!
Whoa. Did you just invent a new form of Acrostic, Rachel? Really well done!
Love it… both the words and format 🤩
That's so good creative and amazing
Really good!
That is so creative. Well done!