
In the approach of serious matters,
rhyme is a distraction that only clatters
hollow, noisy emphasis on endings,
even if it causes the middle’s rending.
When it’s forced it gets no worse,
language mangled by a curse
that cares not for what came first,
obliterates it via verse.
Whitman knew this, broke the form;
art does not follow others’ norms
for the sake of untrained ears,
tossing salt to save the tears.
I abhor rhyme robbed of reason,
it’s a form of linguistic treason:
Language longs to lavishly linger,
tracing mouths with agile fingers,
and it tends to flee in shame
when sacrificed in rhyming’s name.
I prefer a last-line zinger.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
Intrusive rhyme bothers me, except as a weapon.
Intertextuality is my passion.
Formalist/ New Critical are my guiding theories.
My words are mine, not a robot’s.
MA English literature, CofC
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