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Rhapsody in Blue

An Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Remembering the blues before they died

Having been green and purple for a while

Athena smiled in my mind with soft pride

Pleasing a thought of a nymph with some guile

Sounds abound in the silence of the trees

Oscillating towards a recent past

Dionysiaca* in blue with cheese

Yesterday will forever remain passed

In and out of my chest she dances bare

Nothing on except the not-for-me words

Before Greece she displays the finest hair

Letting the music play without the thirds

Undeserving of her love or respect

Every blue is fading up to deflect

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* Ancient Greek epic poem and principal Nonnus piece (5th century CE).

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Dedicated to no one alive. There is no point, then.

“What about the Cosmos?”

It is too freaking vast for a dedication and I hate Mars.

“The Sun? The Moon?”

To the stars who died long ago too.

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George Gershwin - “Rhapsody in Blue” by Leonard Bernstein and the New York Philharmonic

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Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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