Rescue me from the same old past teachings
Save me from the false and the unconscious
I'm sitting on the edge of my destiny
waiting to take flight into the depths of my mind
My attention is blurred and out of focus
I crave nature, love, and inspiration
Guide me through the maze of the unknown
to the prohibited topics nobody openly discusses
only whispers echoed in the depths of darkness
Fill my awareness with intimate profound details
my dreams are observed as fantasies turning real
teach my mind, heart, and body what it is capable
learning new forgotten, hidden truths is my virtue.
Holding onto their secrets like a vice
being breathless in the arms of a lover's grasp
teach me to fly to let go of my heavy rusted chains
to release all of my burdens, nightmares, and torment
to bring to life the fires of my imprisoned passions.....
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Annetta Brown
With pen in hand and heart laid bare, I write a chronicle of experiences, transforming the ordinary into extraordinary verses that resonate with the universal rhythms of existence.
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Nice! ❤️
This is so beautiful. It's a charming poem to read, and highly expressive.
Very passionately written! Well done!