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Release the Beast

A short erotic poem

By Raven DiamondPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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A beast fitting this POEM!

The clothes were strangling

On the old door they were dangling

The sheets resistant

The space between us nonexistent

The darkness inviting

Candles were the only lighting

Her moans spurred

The animal within purred

She had released this beast

Backstory: Here is another erotic poem for you to take a gander at. I was attempting to find a good medium in-between straight "spice" and tame wording. I think this one still leans a bit more towards "spice", but I just don't want it to be a vulgar "spice". I want some class in the metaphors if that makes any sense. Please enjoy another attempt of mine at erotic poems.

NOTE TO REVIEWER: I have submitted this now 3 times. This is not a story this is a poem. I say that multiple times in this. Stop saying it doesn't meet 600 words and rejecting it. It only needs to be 100 words for poems. I submitted into filthy category because of the content. It is not suitable for the poet section due to content. I am trying to follow the content rules by submitting it to this category instead of poets.

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Raven Diamond

I am an actor, published author,sketchbook library artist, model, award nominated singer/songwriter, IT specialist, entrepreneur, wife and mother.

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