The clothes were strangling
On the old door they were dangling
The sheets resistant
The space between us nonexistent
The darkness inviting
Candles were the only lighting
Her moans spurred
The animal within purred
She had released this beast
Backstory: Here is another erotic poem for you to take a gander at. I was attempting to find a good medium in-between straight "spice" and tame wording. I think this one still leans a bit more towards "spice", but I just don't want it to be a vulgar "spice". I want some class in the metaphors if that makes any sense. Please enjoy another attempt of mine at erotic poems.
NOTE TO REVIEWER: I have submitted this now 3 times. This is not a story this is a poem. I say that multiple times in this. Stop saying it doesn't meet 600 words and rejecting it. It only needs to be 100 words for poems. I submitted into filthy category because of the content. It is not suitable for the poet section due to content. I am trying to follow the content rules by submitting it to this category instead of poets.
About the Creator
Raven Diamond
I am an actor, published author,sketchbook library artist, model, award nominated singer/songwriter, IT specialist, entrepreneur, wife and mother.
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