Reflection Planet
A Consciousness Flow
Do you know that clouds roll in
When you need rest?
Rain falls,
To release stress.
Winds will race
to restore your faith
To cleanse your soul
Expose any hole.
Majestic sunsets require your heart
Bring enough love and clouds will part
Lightning flashes
when consciousness crashes,
And thunder tears the sky
When you break free
Of unconscious programs
Good or bad
Who’s to say?
Did you check the weather forecast and pray?
Do you know the sun will shine for joy?
And also for anger, or rage, or annoyed
Too much heat in the body
Brings the burning flames
Forest fires ravage
And we are to blame
What of the tsunami that broke the land?
Do you know of the blood spilled beforehand?
Thousands of bodies flushed into the sea
Before it raged back, unable to let be
Nature is
God
Is
You
Is
Me
There is no separation
Can you see?
About the Creator
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Dog Number 13
May 15, 2023 Strange things are happening. Good-strange, bad-strange, and strange-strange. For starters, me and all my litter mates are able to stand. Some of us can even wiggle around in a clumsy manner. I say wiggle because it isn’t quite walking but it isn’t quite crawling. We just sort of stand and wiggle and fall and take a few steps and then crawl and then get up again. It is in this manner we are able to move around to some degree and explore our surroundings. Naturally we cannot go far. Which is ok, I suppose, because I am very small and I need my mother for food and my siblings to keep me warm and I feel very loved and comforted by them in some way, so I don’t know why I would need to go very far. Having four legs, I must admit, is very strange. It is not a surprise to me that it is challenging to coordinate them to move in the order they need to move. But I can get around a little bit, my eyes can stay open for much longer periods of time now, and it is easier to understand what is happening. So this is new.
By Morgan Longford7 days ago in Chapters
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Beautiful... wonderfully written!!!
Really powerful and great imagery 🌏
Congratulations on your Top Story!
Nicely written
Amazing analogy.
Beautiful. We are all connected! <3
Beautiful poem !! Depth that touches new found heart strings. 🥰
Absolutely beautiful, profound, and sooo thought-provoking, Kayleigh! Gorgeously penned. Congrats on Top Story! 🤗❤️
Fantastic work!
Wow! Dare I say profound! Yes! It was that and a whole lot more! Way to open our eyes and congrats on your Top Story!
Back to say congrats on your top story Kayleigh! 😊👏🎉🎉🎉
In love with this!!!
Kayleigh lassie, this is pure dead brilliant! Such an important message penned so beautifully! Congrats on TS!
Wonderfully structured! Congrats on your Top Story :)
This is written with such a great rhythm and rhyme to it, I really enjoyed the flow :)
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉
Congrats on Top Story! ❤️❤️
Lovely absolutely lovely!!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!!❤️❤️💕
Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.
I feel the same way. When we refuse to do the inner work to release heavy emotions, Earth cleanses and purges regardless. This was wonderfully stated, and congrats on your Top Story! 🥂
Lovely words with a deserved accolade
Yes, I can see! Beautiful poem and congratulations 🎊!!
Congrats on top story!
Oooh, yes I loved this. This feeling of oneness with nature and the world is something I sincerely wish for everyone to experience. I really liked the Tsunami stanza; my thoughts went straight to the 2011 Japan tsunami. So many people were lost and its effects have lingered in those costal towns. Really poignant. Congrats on getting a top story!!
Very well written. We are the universe experiencing the universe.