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REFLECTING

1973

By Babs IversonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2023
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REFLECTING
Photo by Fons Heijnsbroek on Unsplash

Decades have passed by.

Remembering with a sigh.

Reflecting, it has been fifty years.

With many sad and happy tears.

Moments from the past,

thoughts, and memories last.

Shopping at the mall, we skipped the arcadia,

buying chocolate chip cookies with macadamia.

Because the broadcast was live, there wasn't an admission.

Elvis' concert was via satellite transmission.

US auto plants were being closed

Peace agreements had to be composed.

In the "Battle of the Sexes," Billie Jean King wins.

Then, there was the zany season for the Minnesota Twins.

Congress passed a bill for opening the way for a pipeline.

From the North Slope to Valdez, it never crosses a state line.        

A cold September, but there wasn't any snow. 

"American Graffiti" was playing at the picture show.

While Watergate was in the news,

living in Mississippi, they were singing the blues.

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Lilly Cooper10 months ago

    I can picture two old friends reminiscing about the past :)

  • Cendrine Marrouat10 months ago

    Fantastic!

  • Madison Newtonabout a year ago

    Very deep, loved reading this one.

  • Nichelle Calhounabout a year ago

    There with you on this walk.

  • Paula Shabloabout a year ago

    Very nice! Congratulations!

  • Linda Rivenbarkabout a year ago

    P.S. Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Linda Rivenbarkabout a year ago

    Nostalgic poem. Brought back memories. Very well written!

  • Misha Kellyabout a year ago

    Loved this! Nostalgic with all the emotions. Congrats on top story!

  • suman mohanabout a year ago

    Very interesting and beautiful story.

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Nice one Babs. Some fabulous memories intertwined with fascinating events. Congratulations on the top story!

  • Congrats MyDarling 💖☝️

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Nicely done, Babs!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Great poem in truths remembered Babs. Congrats on top story! 🥰

  • Wizardabout a year ago

    Sad about Reality.

  • Bright Okeyeabout a year ago

    Beautiful

  • Isaac Haldeman about a year ago

    Loved this! Keep going! IH

  • Brenton Fabout a year ago

    super nostalgic and warm!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Fantastic work! Congratulations on Top Story, Babs!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Wow! Babs, Nostalgia reborn here. Good times. Quite a Top Story. Beautiful.

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    So happy to see! Congratulations on your top story ❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Great writing Babs! I felt like I had witnessed everything with you even though I wasn't quite born yet! Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Excellent ❤️Top Story

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Yay! Congrats, my friend.

  • CJ Millerabout a year ago

    A heartfelt and nostalgic piece, vividly told! 💗

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