Raw Poetry
A word dump of sorts
sometimes I feel a sort of
secondhand embarrassment
when I see poetry trying
so profusely
to find rhyming profundity
awkwardly stepping around
imaginary stones
in the language road
cleverly cartwheeling
down the path to
devise a discernible pattern
so much twirling about
that we end up
totally lost in the weeds
devouring a word soup and salad
(hold the baguette)
my eyes squint
hoping to catch sight
of the point somewhere
it zips past my face like a fruit fly
nose tickling, nostrils flaring
while the poem's ego sits in its own lap
a fluffy white cat being stroked
slowly bringing a pinky
to the corner of its mouth
Dr. Evil style
(billion and million rhyme, right?)
some people use poems like chains
choking to death on quatrains
constrained by boxes of rules
for every single syllable
it's cruel
and furthermore,
overly flowery language
constricted by proper
grammar and punctuation vines
seems to defeat the purpose of poetry
to me
you see,
I prefer to use my words
like they're Yahtzee dice
scooped up,
shaken, stirred,
scrambled on the dining room table
one on the floor
and hope that maybe, just maybe
I'll catch my lucky break this time
maybe it was all chance
my random thoughts arranged
in just the right way
to make a middle aged man in glasses
scratch his head and go, "huh."
maybe it's just
a statistical inevitability
that one day
one poem I write
might strike a chord
(even if it's raw)
About the Creator
Lolly Vieira
Welcome to my writing page where I make sense of all the facets of myself.
I'm an artist of many mediums and strive to know and do better every day.
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