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Rapids

A quick poem on different forms of writing.

By Silver DauxPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Rapids
Photo by Appolinary Kalashnikova on Unsplash

Poetry

Demands that I spit on the page and describe dark eyes as something

With all the likeness of a black hole, not oil, because there is no light.

There is no sheen, no glitter, just unfathomable lightlessness.

While a simple, unobtrusive little

Story

Will demand that I forget the elegance and inhale suffering instead.

It demands that I avoid the description in favor of something else.

What good is a man's likeness to a so-full-it's-empty gravity pit

When I could be stabbing him through the center with his

Failures.

The novel demands that I look at both, that I dissolve his being,

Shred him until he cannot move and then drag his corpse

To an imaginary finish line and take a nice ride

In the whitewater rapids of his cool, crisp

Tears.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Writer of the dark! Think of it like flipping rocks, the weird little stories underneath are my jam and jelly. Jam and butter? Just jam. Absolutely no use of AI in any of my works :)

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    Written by Silver Daux