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Rafi's Volcano

a Haiku from my son

By Sam SpinelliPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Rafi's Volcano
Photo by Toby Elliott on Unsplash

smoke from the crater

the air is dense and it burns

please do not fall in

Author's note:

My 8 year old son wrote this one, with some minor help from me. He came up with the theme of each line on his own, and I helped get the syllables right.

childrens poetry

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Sam Spinelli

Trying to make real art the best I can, never Ai!

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    Written by Sam Spinelli