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Rafi's Avalanche

A haiku from an 8 year old

By Sam SpinelliPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Rafi's Avalanche
Photo by Krzysztof Kowalik on Unsplash

it's a disaster!

snow thunders down the mountain.

trees snap. crush! woooosh! boom!

Author's note:

Another haiku written mostly by my 8 year old son. I helped him even less with this one than I had with his volcano poem. And I legit feel like the two he wrote with my minor help were way better than all the ones I wrote solo :)

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Sam Spinelli

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    Written by Sam Spinelli