Quiet your mind into a peaceful bliss
where no one is around without a sound
outside where the breeze is but a subtle kiss
Go somewhere where you cant be found
Here you can put to rest your spoken word
and listen to your subconscious voices
You will find many options in order to be heard
let them guide you into making better choices
The answers that you seek are in the silence
and what it has in store to tell,
even if it's a mere whisper use it as guidance
You must learn to use this knowledge well
Quiet creates a sense of inner knowing
and gives you a chance to keep all these lessons flowing
it opens up your mind and gives it space
that no sound can ever replace.
About the Creator
Annetta Brown
With pen in hand and heart laid bare, I write a chronicle of experiences, transforming the ordinary into extraordinary verses that resonate with the universal rhythms of existence.
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Yet another beautiful poem. I am loving your work.
You’re a great poet!