
Laguna Beach
Saw it in your eyes
like a fire on a mountain
a soft silent rage
Felt it in your smile
a reflection of myself
salt water that burns
Touched by your silence
your dreamy unspoken words
shook my hidden world
It was your breathing
the air I craved and chocked on
exhaling goodbye
About the Creator
Debbi Lonmon
I am a musician/songwriter and practicing story teller.
I also love poetry and creative writing.
It's wonderful to be part of a group like this. Wish I'd joined sooner:-)
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