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bleed me a blue river.

By Caroline JanePublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Kyle Brinker on Unsplash

Beneath tissue skin,

into a concrete basin,

tributaries bleed.

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Caroline Jane

Open hearted maverick.

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  • Tiffany Gordon 29 days ago

    Beautifully done!!!!

  • Lena Borondia9 months ago

    WOW! Felt this!

  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    Interesting... 💙

  • Dana Stewart10 months ago

    That second line is riveting!

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