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Postcard Killing

Seaside Melodies

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Postcard Killing
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

A Poem for Poppy's Prompt

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Another postcard killing

bodies concealed in a bag

The end is the beginning

underneath red warning flags

Just a few steps down the beach

near the remnants of sandcastles

Hope and sirens out of reach

far from the news media assholes

Lies remains of the remains

left bare, exposed on salty display

Abandoned in sandy graves

sprawled in appalling array

Wind-chimes sing final farewells

as the flesh and tissue decay

While sea breezes billow and swell

the faintest of notions play

surreal poetryfact or fictionCONTENT WARNING
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

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  • Anna 3 months ago

    Well written!

  • Poppy 4 months ago

    This is so eerily captivating! "Wind-chimes sing final farewells as the flesh and tissue decay" Awesome lines!! The whole poem was so well crafted!

  • Shirley Belk4 months ago

    I think Mark Graham has a very good point!!!!

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    This could the start to a short story or even a detective novel.

  • A clever crime poem including all five prompts. Paul’s right… Poppy’s prompts have netted sad poems this month!🧐

  • Nicole Gibson4 months ago

    great poem. I wonder did the Gilgo Beach Case inspire you? I'm a bit of a true crime buff and that's what your poem made me think of.

  • Mother Combs4 months ago

    💙

  • I love windchimes, enjoy postcards, & hate killings almost as what the media tends to do with them. Incredible blending here, Kelli.

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Damn...we are all possessed by sad and maudlin stuff from Poppy's words. This is yet more creative brilliance from you Kelli!

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