Posey Girl
Illusions of a Happy Family
She sits at the dining room table
waiting to turn eight.
Square windows do not allow enough light
for the flowers mother picked. They are wild,
loud petals.
Flowers blooming
like the ones stenciled on the edges
of the stationary mother clutches in her hand.
She waits upstairs, not ready to enter
her daughter’s next year.
The girl notices her reflection in the vase,
that her hair isn’t sitting
quite right,
like the present she opened early
from daddy. A dress
with a flower embroidered
where the pocket should have been.
No pocket for lollipops to share
or a note tucked close to her heart,
like the note tucked inside the card that says:
Smile! Today’s a special day!
Posies fall out when the girl unfolds
the vanilla paper.
She props the note against the vase,
and while the girl waits, she reads the writing
through the glass.
About the Creator
Jennifer Lorraine - Bloch McGee
*Imagination is the plaything of fairies. Without imagination we are doomed*
My heart and soul goes into my writing. If I don't bleed a little, I haven't done it right.
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Comments (4)
I can just see that little girl. I could feel her dress. Beautifully written. *also, thank you for your support :)
You wrote this in such a way that completely envelopes the reader in the feelings of the moment, beautiful!!
Fantastic imagery! You paint the scene so beautifully, choosing such striking details for the reader to latch onto. I like the theme of how time passes even when we just wish for it to slow down. Nice work!
This was so deep and emotional. Brilliant use of imageries and very beautifully written! Loved your poem so much!