Poem That I Write
Where, Oh Where, Did you Come From?
Poem that I write ,
Did you come from me?
Or were you in captivity,
Longing to be free.
Did I make you up?
My brain child could you be?
Or were you in the stream of life
And only flowed through me.
I must be very quiet
Or you will not come my way;
But once you fall upon the page ,
I know you’re here to stay.
Sometimes you do amaze me
With your beauty, wit, and power;
And I know I cultivated
But did not create your flower.
Poem that I write ,
I’m glad to give you birth;
But it’s the source from which you came
That really gives you worth.
Note: I wrote this poem years ago in a blank journal I kept my poetry in. After several moves and relocations, I seem to have lost the original copy, but the words came back to me and I wanted to share it.
I have often felt, when writing a poem, that it was being dictated to me and I was merely the transcriber. Other times, I have "heard" the words to part of a poem but did not write it down. Later, I would see almost the same, exact words published by another writer.
That is where I got the idea of poetry being in the 'stream of life', destined to be written - if not by one poet, then by another. It is always a joy to be the one through whom a poem comes to life!
About the Creator
Linda Rivenbark
I believe in the magic of words, love, and tenacity. There is a world out there that needs to be explored, researched, and written out to try to make some sense of it, and to make a better place for the children of tomorrow.
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Comments (9)
Fabulous!!! For me, it is very relatable. Thoughts and ideas appear from nowhere.
I don't get it.
I love this! I have had the same experience with the majority of the poems I have written. I have also made a very similar comments about writing poetry. Very relatable and well done.
Beautiful words.
This was very interesting. The poem itself was great but the comment after the poem was deep and reflective.
Wow, amazing. The words came back to you. That is really a gift and talent you have. Beautiful poem 🥰🌹
I loved this
I feel the same way too sometimes
Very well expressed. I often feel I am the purveyor of something beyond myself as well, but ultimately, it's just me staring back from the mirror.