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Pluck My Petals

Prompted Poem 6/3/2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

You peeled the petals back,

delicate,

like fruit,

to suckle the sweetness of honey,

said I bloomed for you.

I longed to believe it.

Your lips pressed against

each sacred velvet edge,

the tips of your fingers

pollen stained,

like secrets meant to be

melted into saccharine spoons.

You plucked my petals

one

by

one

bitten between your declarations

as I shivered into your palms,

begging to be dismantled

in a way that would have me

growing back twice as full.

But I lie bare

adrift in a hollow fog,

an empty stamen,

a relic pulled clean,

an alter left petalless.

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Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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    Written by Ellie Hoovs