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Please Rescue Me Guanyin

A free verse poem about my urgent need for inner peace

By Talia DevoraPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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goddess of compassion and mercy,

please rescue me

from agonizing fear and despair.

The emotional turmoil

is strangling me,

so hard

that I can’t mentally breathe.


goddess of compassion and mercy,

please help me

ward off evil spirits

and bad energy.

I’m in urgent need

of inner peace,

so I can sleep

without fighting an emotional war.


goddess of mercy and compassion,

you are the only one

I can depend on right now.

Promise me

you won’t leave

until I’ve received your divine care,

and fall fast asleep.


goddess of compassion and mercy,

I love you,

I need you,

I want you.

Please rescue me,

before I run out

of inner peace.

A refill

of your inner peace potion

will heal my heart

of fear and despair.

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Talia Devora

Poetess, visual artist and lifestyle/quiz writer! My pastimes include reading, sleeping, gaming, music, fitness, etc! Be yourselves, be kind and value life! Let's connect and be friends!

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    That was wonderfully written and something I didn't know I needed to read today :) I hope Guanyin answers your pleas :)

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Beautifully written.

  • Tiffany Gordon 3 months ago

    Wonderful piece! Praying 4 u!

  • Halden Mile3 months ago

    A great article from a great lady.

  • Great almost mystical piece

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