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Playing with the Haiku words

My haiku, my take poem, and thirdly my end Haiku

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024

Once again my take on a Haike, turning it to three I enjoy playing with The haiku what do you think? Please like if you do and comment ❤️

The Haiku

Dancing brings danger,

Flowing with rhythm, beware—

Don't break a leg now.

My interpretation

The slippery ice

heat melting the audience

oh no broken bones

The end Haiku

Both feet on the ground

forgetting about the show

look after your limbs

Haiku

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk