Puffy pillows piled up high,
People waiting for the signal to fly,
Playful giggles fill the air,
Pandemonium erupts without a care.
Pillows start flying left and right,
Pandemonium turns into a pillow fight,
Pillows whizzing past like a blur,
People ducking, dodging with a purr.
Pillow feathers start to fly,
People's hair and clothes askew, oh my,
People laughing, screaming, and squealing,
Pillow fight madness, it's an amazing feeling.
Pillows everywhere, on the floor and on the bed,
People jumping, leaping, and turning their heads,
Pillow fight chaos reigns supreme,
People lost in the moment, it's like a dream.
Pillow fight frenzy starts to slow,
People taking deep breaths, starting to glow,
Pillows on the floor, feathers in the air,
Pillow fight over, but memories to share.
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To the readers who took the time, To read these words, in rhythm and rhyme,Thank you for joining in on the fun, And letting this poem brighten up your sun.
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Quincy.V
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I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
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Comments (7)
You captured the feeling of pillow fights so well!
I love this, especially the last few lines! So fun
Awww, this was so fun and wonderful!
Very good and Playfully written π―ππ₯°π
I liked that, this was a very fun poem. It had a great rhythm and a great feel the whole way through!
Oh! Looks like so much fun, Enjoyed the fun.
Love the poem and the emotions you brought forth