Pierced Pain: The Aftermath
Poem using Poppy's Prompts 10!

Your
(patronising, condescending,
dismissive
and
just a little hypocritical
words
p—rising open my
-i—nsides draining
--e—very strike
---r—eaching deeper points
----c—an't breathe, can't
---e—ven do anything except lie here
through
my already wounded, failing heart
(of your inception, divination, creation)
like
darts
through a balloon
(blood red burst on the pale)
*
~I~
*
Your
all-facade-all-lies-no-substance
form of love
(is it love,
really love
if it's filled with nothing but hate?
Well... is it? Is. It?)
leaves me
--d—angerously
-r—unning low on oxygen
y—earning to breathe
as highlands
in a drought
*
~am~
*
Your
c—austic
-a—nneal
--l—ayer upon
---l—ayer
--o—ver my
-u—ncovered
--s—kinned and
-e—mpty
d—ead heart
affection
(infection, infliction, affliction)
leaves me
covered in
s—peaking of love, when you don't know how to show it
-p—leasing no other, but yourself,
--l—eaving a desert, a sand dune of misery
---I—nside and out
----n—ever once admitting fault or showing care
---t—rading heartfelt words with you, was just a chore
--e—very time, I lost myself a little more
-r—aped my confidence, my esteem
s—craped and scarred my core
sharp
like the quills of a porcupine
*
~through~
*
Your
non-existent-dearly-bereft-dead
care
(do you?)
and
attention
(are you even listening?)
seals my fate
like a black cat
crossing my path
*
~with~
*
Your
walking away,
as
d—own low
-e—mpty
--e—mpty
---p—lace
as the gap
it created,
was like a key
that opened
the door
to a new future
for me, not us,
for me
not
*
~you~
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Poem...with lots of different formatting elements and acrostics, using Poppy's Prompts 10 words.
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Paul Stewart
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