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Petrichor

- scent of rain on dry earth

By Teresa RentonPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
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My ode to petrichor (n) - Greek origin - the scent of rain on dry earth.

Mornings smell different,

especially after rain.

Dew cleaned ginnels and sorry patches of grass by front doors gleam, refreshed.

Night’s silence scents the air still,

lingers.

Rise early

submit to a silence

feel it fill you with space—

a vessel to fill with yourself.

By day, rain hurries people

into houses, offices, shops.

Like night, rain cleanses,

silence enters,

that impromptu visitor—

rain silence,

soaks through silt

releasing history to those

who emerge first,

those who waited under a bus-shelter, an oak tree,

those who swept puddles with their feet and saluted the onslaught.

That soily dampy rooty muddy meat of earth releases

my grandmother’s sweat as she dug soil to plant food,

my grandfather’s fear as he dug trenches while men cried and bled,

my mother’s tears when a man broke her heart,

my father’s guilt.

Every laugh that gushed from parted lips sits within our soil,

tears of incandescent love

when my child was born,

soft, delicate

like moulded jelly.

The scent of rain on earth—

I am fresh cut jasmine,

good blood, bad blood,

history, silence, space—

makes me feel

pristine

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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  • Hannah Moore8 months ago

    This really is beautiful, it evokes a sense of rootedness.

  • A. Lenae9 months ago

    Oh my, this is so very beautiful. I think I ended up with nearly 10 favorite lines by the time I finished reading. Your palpable imagery and rhythm just pump blood into this, and the feeling of being regenerated is what a reader is left with. What a special piece!

  • Whoaaaa, I love how you weaved all those emotions into this poem! Amazing work!

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