Perspective
A Haiku
The girl on the wall
Watches from beneath blue wisps,
Silently judging
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Laura Pruett
Laura Pruett, author of multiple short stories and poems, writes in a wide variety of genres and on a myriad of topics. She's currently writing Gedra Gets A Man, a steamy fantasy romance on Kindle Vella. Look around and see what you like!
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