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Peel Back My Layers

(a modern Villanelle)

By j.e.ridpathPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Villanelle Challenge
Peel Back My Layers
Photo by Adrien Converse on Unsplash

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin —

Religiously anatomize my body and mind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Fervently flay my fascia and flesh — begin

Your devout exploration of denuded truth confined;

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin.

Faithfully extricate fibrous veins and sinews to pin

Hands in prayer, as around my wrists they bind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Bravely bore into bones to meet marrow of ricin,

Where toxic plasma and blood cells are aligned;

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin.

Zealously sever my tongue where tales sensual spin,

And delicately dissect my cataract eyes, evil-blind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Finally, extract my bleeding heart as it beats within,

Know your own — with my name in old-blood-ink signed.

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Villanellesurreal poetry

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j.e.ridpath

"No mud, no lotus" - Thich Nhat Hahn

Author of "a curious dream", available now on Amazon: https://a.co/d/1JgqhMd

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Moments; self-destructive storms -

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