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Pass on the ass

It's coarse to walk the best course

By Thavien YliasterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Pass on the ass
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Author's Notes: This limerick was originally commented on KJ Aartila's limerick, "I Love Horses, but Not Your Impression."

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    Strangely beautiful! Thank you. ❤️

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