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On a shiny afternoon
In the middle of June
We decide to have a picnic
In the nature's magic
My favourite meals
Are what the basket conceals
Pancakes with cocoa
Made from the lightest dough
We have some jam here too
Something special and brand new.
The flavour of this dessert
Gives the sweetest concert
I can't wait to taste it,
Let's say bon appetite!π
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They sound delicious. π
Yummy! All these tasty poems are making me feel very nibbly. Thank you very munch for sharing!
Yum!!
Mmmm cocoa pancakes! I wish I could have some. Loved your poem!
Oh my! Iβm really getting hungry now! Tasty poem, Anna! Loved the picture too. Made my mouth water!
Sweet!
Ooh, sounds so summary decedent.
Its 11pm here and I want pancakes! With honey, or lemon juice and sugar, even hot from the pan sans topping! Good work!