Poets logo

Orphan of the Night

Five-Minute Challenge Poem

By Joelle EšŸŒ™Published 11 months ago ā€¢ 1 min read
7
Orphan of the Night
Photo by Marco Trassini on Unsplash

Orphan of the night

Sitting alone on the riverbank, in the streetlampā€™s spotlight

Wondering what he did to deserve to be here

In a past life, or this lifeā€“before he could see clear

He was just a baby when they left him on the street.

The bar smelling of bitterness and whiskey neat

Home is a concept heā€™s never known

Wherever he lays his head, heā€™s always alone

But thereā€™s something in the darkness that touches him

Walking along the riverbank, with no one to call kin

A semse of freedom that permeates his every breath

A wanderlust within him; a place that fears not even death

He loves the people he meets out in the cold

The small joys, the sadness, the friends who have grown old

He looks in at the happy people.

They call him orphan

They laugh at what they have, and he doesnā€™t

No one to call kin

But the orphan sees something different.

To him, their lives are a lie

Living to fit in

Their souls never touching the sky

Never wandering the darkness along the riverbank

Never knowing the thrill of having nothing in the bank

The ever-present closeness of deathā€™s keen call

With nothing to lose, thereā€™s no way to fall

They can have their homes. Heā€™ll keep his alone

Living life on the run

Born a rolling stone

surreal poetry
7

About the Creator

Joelle EšŸŒ™

There is gold in every piece of your story āœØ

šŸ“ Find me on Medium

ā­ļø Shop the Starfish Project

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (3)

Sign in to comment
  • Andrei Z.11 months ago

    Great poem, Joelle!

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    I am so glad I subscribed if it's treats like this I will get to read! So sad, with such powerful and beautiful word choices!

  • Brenton F11 months ago

    The sadness in this is so palpable, I can feel it! You have done really well!

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

Ā© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.