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One Rose Remains

A poem for the woman who filled a mountainside with color

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
One Rose Remains
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My grandmother counted the year
by her roses.

Long before anyone called
across the holler,
she had already wandered among them,

lifting a branch,
brushing dark earth from her apron,
smiling over some fresh surprise
that no one else had yet discovered.

Scarlet pressed against cream.

Soft yellow leaned into deep crimson.

Peach stood beside shades
I have never found again,
no matter how many gardens
have welcomed me since.

Children believed
they had wandered into a story.

Grown people forgot
whatever burden had followed them
up the mountain.

Even skeptics
always dwelt longer than intended.

My grandmother never spoke
of creating beauty.

She simply cared
for what she loved,
season after season,

until the hillside answered her
with more color
than a dialect could ever gather.

Time claimed that garden.

One by one,
the bushes disappeared,

until nothing remained
where such splendor once lived.

Only a single rose grows now.

I planted it high on the mountain
beside her grave.

Each year it opens
to the same sun
that once warmed her garden,

and when I stand there,

I can almost believe
she has stepped away
only long enough

to gather another armful of roses.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael