on grief & motion
a response to shyaire

grief finds
- clings -
to the life-raft motion
of grey lead in notebooks
fingers on keys
**
and we write into existence
what isn’t
and remember what is
and imagine what
might have been
**
thank you
for writing
and sparking my grief’s movement
for giving me a space to hold it
leave it intact and transform it
all at once
this was a response I wrote a while ago, after reading Shyaire’s poem, pictured above. i remembered it after seeing the prompt below. and while i didn’t write it exactly as the prompt suggests, it fits in a way (and creative license, right?…right??). i’ll also attempt a “proper” following of the instructions.

About the Creator
ali
a tangled mess of thoughts. occasionally a clear one bursts through. how about writing things in a public forum? seems wise.
she / her
unceded Wurundjeri & Boon Wurrung Lands
substack: aliwriteswords
insta / upscrolled: @aliwriteswords
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