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A Haiku

By Natasha CollazoPublished 24 days ago 1 min read
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Everyone I’ve loved

has loved me back so fiercely,

but yet, they’re not here.

Mental HealthheartbreakHaikuBlackout
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About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Werewolf Writer

I get inspired at the mid of night

Stock market by day, howler by night.

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Instagram: @sunnycollazo

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  • Caroline Craven18 days ago

    Wow. This was so awesome. So much emotion. This was incredible.

  • Thavien Yliaster22 days ago

    Oh, that's harsh. I feel that. It's one thing to outlive those people that have loved You fiercely as You loved them, it's another for them to just leave out of Your life. More often than not we're always thinking about what we did wrong. Yet, the truth is, in most scenarios there was nothing we could do to keep them loving us as we wanted to love them. Reminds me of the song, "Got Used to Somebody to Love Me."

  • While those you've never noticed, continue to linger just hoping for the grace of a single glance.

  • Unfortunately, that's how the world works. It's the bitter truth. Sending you lots of love and hugs 🥺❤️

  • Rachel Deeming23 days ago

    Succinct but sorrowful. Great picture too.

  • D. J. Reddall23 days ago

    Melancholy and elegant.

  • Compelling work, Natasha. Beautifully said.

  • It makes one wonder many different questions. Well written, Natasha.

  • TheSpinstress24 days ago

    Simple yet devastating. Well done.

  • D.K. Shepard24 days ago

    Very poignant! Fierceness is intense but often fizzles until it forgets. Beautifully written haiku, Natasha!

  • Paul Stewart24 days ago

    So much power in so few words. Sad but beautiful, Natasha!

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