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Ollie and His Dolly

Another Limerick!

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Created in NightCafe

There was once a man called Ollie

Who bought himself an old dolly

It had a mean face

Was covered in lace

He died of shock when it ate a lolly

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Thank you for reading! Another little limerick. This is my new thing. Well, one of my new things. I hope you enjoyed it. If you did, please let me know by clicking the heart, dropping a comment or both.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

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  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Cute!!!

  • Gal Muxabout a year ago

    Oh fun!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    I totally forgot what a limerick is, thanks for reminding me. That could be our next challenge. Such fun. The doll scared me. Dhar would love this, she's got a dark talent.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    You creeped me right out with that one!!! Fun wording though :) I can see why Dharrsheena featured it in the horror group. Great work!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Not the best choice before bed. Lol. Nice work Paul

  • Ooooo, dark and creepy the way i like it!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Lol. Good one.

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