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Oh Jeff...

For Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge"

By KomalPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Detail from Roy Lichtenstein, I love you but, 1964, private collection

Oh, Jeff... I love you too...

but...

You ate my leftovers again....

That wasn’t just spaghetti—it was a symbol of trust!

How can I build a future with someone

who raids the fridge like a raccoon at midnight?

I’ve been patient, Jeff.

The pizza....

The cheesecake....

Even my secret stash of chocolate!

But this?

This was the last meatball.

________________________

Thanks for reading!

This was written for Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge."

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Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

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    Written by Komal