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Ode to Hibiscus

My new flower is done blooming

By Lana V LynxPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
The last of the three flowers

So pretty in red

but lasting only one day

hibiscus fell off.

***

It gave me three buds,

Each flowered just for one day,

Now done for awhile.

The first flower

I'll wait for next batch

Eagerly looking forward

to more blooms to come.

***

Should I crop its top

So that it grows sideways, not

In one fine tall stalk?

The second flower

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About the Creator

Lana V Lynx

Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist

@lanalynx.bsky.social

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    Written by Lana V Lynx