so the next time i’m not paying attention
you don’t need to mention it to me
i know i’m not and it happens a lot
it is and just how it is…going to be
so the next time i don't nod
or forget and not simply say OK
don’t pout or gloat or jump down my throat
even if i reply with a simple “ay”
so the next time you think you’ve got it tough
you won’t even need a mile in my shoes
measure it by what you have to gain
not how much you could possibly lose
so the next time you feel like giving up
at your wits end and the nerves are all affray
remember that it’s just a passing phase
but if you want to play you have to pay
so the next time you think you have it sussed
and your scared outweighs your cheer
the hounds of doubt and derision are about
and are attracted to the smell of fear
so the next time you're milking your very own clever
and all your ducks are neatly in a row
just remember this is a transitional phase
because there’s so much you’ll never know
so the next time you think you may need to pause
and you get caught frozen cold, mid hesitation
redefine and unwind don’t get caught in any mind
simply pre-tune to a completely different station
so the next you find yourself grappling the intangible
just be a sequence of existential sub atomic reactions
we are no more than highly evolved bipedal jellyfish
that became enamored by our many distractions
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Brenton F
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Comments (3)
Omg this was so relatable! I often zone out or dissociate. Thank you for reminding me that it is okay and to be kind to ourselves!
A refreshing voice - you have a knack for telling it like it is!😊✨👍
As always, your wording is so powerful and well-selected! I loved the subtle mix of inspirational/spiritual flare to this. Well done!