Warm and orange glow
Worries were set on fire
Reduced to ashes
Ashes floated among them
Bones were left behind
The ground swallowed it
To burn in the depths of hell
Deep Earth's core
Clouds' dams burst open
The rain blessed the fertile soil
Tiny leaves emerged
Sometimes when things get too overwhelming and your anxiety is sky-high, take a deep breath and set your worries on Fire, figuratively. Together with the Air and the Earth, you will see it disappear. And finally with some Water, a New Hope is born ❤️
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About the Creator
Dharrsheena Raja Segarran
I'm a Certified Nutritionist 🌱 and these are what I mostly write:
〰️ Fiction (Horror/Thriller)
〰️ Non-Fiction (Nutrition and True Crime)
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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This is very good and I'm going to have to come back to it several more times before I can take it in fully. Like all really good poetry there's more here than a first reading can digest.
Lovely one Dhar.
Dandelion winds..the imagery 🤍
I missed this one. Anxiety is the pits! I love the metaphors D. Thanks for this good reminder! 👍
Absolutely love this.
Wow this was powerful! Incredible writing. Liked and subscribed!
Beautiful imagery and message!
I love the message of this, but I also loved the vivid detail and imagery you use.
Love the intensity of it. ❤️
How in blazes do you get so many people to read your work? Holy. Geez.
loved your poem keep it up
Thank you! Your expression for each element in was outstanding. Great Quadru-haiku. I also loved ❤️ The Mirror Journey another well written piece.
Thank you for this beautiful and expressive poem. The last stanza reminds of the floods my friends and family are going through in California. "Clouds' dams burst open".... The torrential downpours..... So much destruction! But then comes the blessing: "The rain blessed the fertile soul" and "Tiny leaves emerged." Gorgeous.
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Oh Princess Dharsheena, you’ve outdone yourself. Beautiful 🥰
Absolutely beautifully wrote short and precisely too the point. Captures you instantly, learning so much about short but effective literature.
Congrats on top story ♥️🥰
I didn't understand what you were writing about until I reached the end. I loved your poetic story I'm not judging you negatively in any way. Please understand I am a story teller not a poet. When I apply myself. My stories smoothly flow from start to finish with a fluent motion. I think next time you try this style of poem. Have a go smoothing the beginning out so the next subject is related to the following subject but not related to the next or the previous two lines of text. I felt like it hopped and skipped between completely different related texts . It felt kind of jagged edge the first time I read your poem. This is what confused me. It kind of hickupped the way through the beginning. Not in a singular fluent motion. I understood when I got to the main paragraph. What I'm trying to suggest is a slightly different style but I believe you can do it. Making a great job of it and blowing the crowds away. Keep up the great work I look forward to reading plenty more from you in the future. I hope you don't mind my lengthy comments?? I put into it my heart and soul. Hugs and kisses Jase @dragonreader71 Instagram account oooxx Happiness Joy and Pleasure is Good Life is Good Life is what Pleasure is all about not money
Awesome, This makes me want to try and then again, what is the point. This was perfection