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Neither the Day, Nor the Hour

Alternative haiku for the Haunted Echoes Challenge

By John R. GodwinPublished 12 months ago • 1 min read
Neither the Day, Nor the Hour
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Pinprick on my palm

My flinch flips the black spider

Hourglass tolls red.

I considered submitting this as my entry for the Haunted Echoes Challenge.

Here is the haiku I submitted for the Challenge:

Enjoyed writing these and would appreciate any feedback on both.

Haiku

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John R. Godwin

Sifting daily through the clutter of my mind trying to create something beautiful.

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    Written by John R. Godwin