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Nature Of A Story

Elements Of A Journey

By sleepy draftsPublished 18 days ago 1 min read
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Nature Of A Story
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a seed is planted,

nurtured by soil's caress

until stories grow.

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water's soft healing

can cut through steel at high speeds.

kind words are currents.

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ideas move like clouds:

some drift away in fragments,

while others find shape.

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stories can ignite

from pages or sparks between

friends and bonfires.

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sleepy drafts

a sleepy writer named em :)

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  • Vivin Akshay12 days ago

    See A Glance If You Like Dream Poetry 👉👉https://vocal.media/poets/dreams-a-journey-through-the-mind

  • Brilliant metaphors. The third verse particularly resonated with me- that early stage of developing a story idea when you're not sure if it will dissipate or form into something definite. Well done.

  • Melanie Tongmar15 days ago

    Lovely - the one about clouds is quite special.

  • Mary E Bradbury15 days ago

    I really liked this one…there was a playful yet soulful vibe.

  • Congratulations on your top story!! Lovely

  • Pamela Williams16 days ago

    Inspiring and beautiful.

  • Rachel Rose16 days ago

    Kind words are currents. Love that line

  • Bonnie JS Eglin17 days ago

    Oh Congrats on Top Story! I just saw on vocal's post in my blog feed. SHARING on my blog now! Cool. Have a nice day

  • Bonnie JS Eglin17 days ago

    Wow ...very elegant. Love the gentle vibe it stirs. Also. NICE to see an example of how it looks with all 4 in one piece. I did all mine separate pieces. Wondered how it'd look as 1... (Thought it would feel cluttered) Wasn't sure Enjoyed your work!

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  • Dana Stewart17 days ago

    Such a creative premise! Love it and Congrats on Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes17 days ago

    Congrats on the top story

  • Nice quadra-haiku

  • Gina C.17 days ago

    Simply gorgeous and inspirational. Amazing work, and congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍

  • Keila Aartila17 days ago

    Simply gorgeous! Very nice! :)

  • Daniel Jeyaraman17 days ago

    All the best to you, my friend. I have subscribed to your work, commented, hearted, and provided my insights. <3

  • Jo Cro18 days ago

    Lovely x

  • Heather Hubler18 days ago

    Yes!!!! This so deserved a Top Story, congratulations!!

  • Caroline Jane18 days ago

    Loving this concept! Great haikuing!

  • Savannah Sveta18 days ago

    i adored this <3 so beautiful!

  • Pryor Da costa18 days ago

    Great story!! I post similar stuff and fiction stories like this one, you should check it out!! Have a good day!

  • Your choice of words were so beautiful! Loved this gorgeous Haiku!

  • You have such a beautiful way of weaving words, my friend 🥰

  • Heather Hubler18 days ago

    Wow, I am in love with the way you tied all those ideas together. So amazing!!!

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