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MYTH

EVEN WHEN YOU'RE SPEAKING THE REAL IT COULD BE CALLED A MYTH…

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
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MYTH
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Vault over, Self-infliction.

Just like a walk

In the rain.

Rinse,

My meager

Esteem.

I Breathe

The Excellence

Of Natural

Incenses...

Could It Be a myth-

Discolors still at bay

To display

An image of quiet insecurities.

Not long before

We comprehend

How to mend,

That portion-

But somehow

We strive to

Drive and

Push through…

So Now that

We Prosper,

And forever remember the image

Not long ago

Of an individual

Who manufactured

Happiness

With a Reason Why…

-Not A Myth

Beauty drops anchor from within the nature

Of one's Character

and

Proclivity.

The reason we live is formed by Growth because of a

MYTH-

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  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    great poem

  • Caroline Craven9 months ago

    Vault over, self-infliction. What a great first line... Love this one. Great job.

  • Sarah D9 months ago

    Myth of the cosmos, a tree, that tree could have been you or me. But all is fair in life and war, and so I wished upon a star. Hows that for a different comment.

  • Natalie Wilkinson9 months ago

    I also like the line that starts “Beauty drops anchor…”

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 months ago

    Brilliant work lil bro!

  • The Dani Writer9 months ago

    "Beauty drops anchor from within the nature of one's character." Ignition point I tell ya! Yesness Lonzo!!!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji9 months ago

    The myth-builds us up or breaks us

  • Whoaaa, I really love them concept you went with here! Amazing work!

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • The myths we embrace tend to define how we live & into whom we grow to be. E.g., "I'm no more significant than anyone else" vs. "I'm insignificant." Both are myths. The first becomes humility & grace, the second becomes despair. BTW, loved the poem. Just when I think I know where you're going, you shift things (whether mightily or subtly), causing me to reassess, readjust & ponder. Well done.

  • Beautiful poem!

  • Real Poetic9 months ago

    Beautifully and brilliantly said! ✍🏽 💗

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️🌈

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