There are volcanoes on my mother’s legs
Years of exploration normalize them
One ruptures
She tries to outrun them like they did in Pompeii
The volcano leaves a valley in her leg
Like the remnants of a nuclear site
Taking the flesh behind
I see my mother in Colima as a little girl
Aware that her father is beating her mother at home
Her legs disappear into the water
She floats among the fish
Wishing she could swim to America
Instead she stares at el Volcán de Fuego
And wonders if it will eat her alive
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