My Face
Drifted Away
Mirror reflection
My face in rippled water
Drifts away, goodbye
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
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Comments (28)
This was spellbinding 😊
nice one
lovely and sad. well done.
Hey awesome man
Well executed delivery Rick. Loved the Hendrix inclusion. Perfect way to start the evening after work! Thanks.
Brilliant! This is exactly why having a 100 word limit on most of the poetry is a mistake.
👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽Congrats... thought-provoking... excellent video!
Beautiful!
Congratulations 🎆 🎉 💯👍🎯😉🎯 Let's Go❗❗❗❗❗🌟
Congratulations on Top Story!!
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congratulations on Top Story :)
Yay! Congrats on the Top Story.
Congratulations on Top Story!!
Awesome work! Congrats on your Top Story, too! :)
A great thought provoking haiku. 🥰
Love this. It has a lot of depth to it. I love the idea of ripples - to me they represent change, but I like your perspective of something drifting away with them. Nice job!
Don't drift too far. We need you. Lovely Haiku for u.
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Your poems always hit me hard! It's so sad that we have to age. Especially when we're young at heart. Brilliant Haiku!
This is really good. Well one.
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I like your water Haiku 👍
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Beautiful!!! Left some love!!!