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Drifted Away

By Rick HenryPublished 15 days ago β€’ 1 min read
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Mirror reflection

My face in rippled water

Drifts away, goodbye

surreal poetrysad poetrynature poetryinspirationalheartbreak
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Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

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  • Vivin Akshay2 days ago

    See A Glance If You Like Dream Poetry πŸ‘‰πŸ‘‰https://vocal.media/poets/dreams-a-journey-through-the-mind

  • nice one

  • Rachel Rose7 days ago

    lovely and sad. well done.

  • Edwan9 days ago

    Hey awesome man

  • Dean F. Hardy11 days ago

    Well executed delivery Rick. Loved the Hendrix inclusion. Perfect way to start the evening after work! Thanks.

  • j.d. davis11 days ago

    Brilliant! This is exactly why having a 100 word limit on most of the poetry is a mistake.

  • Sharon Bethea11 days ago

    πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½Congrats... thought-provoking... excellent video!

  • sleepy drafts11 days ago

    Beautiful!

  • Congratulations πŸŽ† πŸŽ‰ πŸ’―πŸ‘πŸŽ―πŸ˜‰πŸŽ― Let's Goβ—β—β—β—β—πŸŒŸ

  • Gina C.12 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • Shannon Loewen12 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story :)

  • Cathy holmes12 days ago

    Yay! Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Keely Ann12 days ago

    Beautiful :)

  • Heather Hubler12 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Keila Aartila12 days ago

    Awesome work! Congrats on your Top Story, too! :)

  • Scott Wade12 days ago

    A great thought provoking haiku. πŸ₯°

  • Gina C.13 days ago

    Love this. It has a lot of depth to it. I love the idea of ripples - to me they represent change, but I like your perspective of something drifting away with them. Nice job!

  • Novel Allen13 days ago

    Don't drift too far. We need you. Lovely Haiku for u.

  • Your poems always hit me hard! It's so sad that we have to age. Especially when we're young at heart. Brilliant Haiku!

  • Cathy holmes14 days ago

    This is really good. Well one.

  • Good one Rick

  • Mariann Carroll14 days ago

    I like your water Haiku πŸ‘

  • Clever β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’―β—β—β—

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