when you left my hand
You were breathless
I looked at your eyes
I was heartless
You slept peacefully
but I was still awake
You left everyone happily
Now what would I take?
How would I burry you
You still look alive
What do you don't know that I knew
How would I survive
It's still like a nightmare
I wish would wake up
I still would call you 'my dear'
Where do you left I'll pickup
I miss your hi hello
you are still in my heart
it Oh my dear fellow
I can't stop thinking about you why not?
I'm still in the dreams of you
not knowing what to do
I still remember you
When would I forget you
I want to hear your words badly
Am I actually deaf
You are not just my friend but Family
without you, to live in the world has become tough
Days can pass by easily
Is this what reality
there is no day I ain't sadly
Darling you are still in my phone gallery!
when you left my hand
You were breathless
I looked at your eyes
I was heartless
You slept peacefully
but I was still awake
You left everyone happily
Now what would I take?
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
Comments (5)
I liked this it was sad but I felt a lot of emotins when reading it.
Very emotional piece. You took a sad occurance, and put that into words. Well done.
Lets appreciate our loved ones while they are still here...
Sad but meaningful.
An emotional piece- it's hard to comprehend that your friend is gone. You wish they would wake up and come back. Devasting.