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My Bloody Bullies

by Marie Cadette Pierre-Louis 2 months ago in heartbreak
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They were

My Bloody Bullies
Photo by Jen Theodore on Unsplash

They were my days

When my mind was away

I only see eyes

And I hear thousands laughs

They were voices in my silent heart

One look at them was a pondering vibe


Sarcasm, I love them

Hatred, Still I was in love

Their smile was a sham

I was not ashamed

Nothing I had

They were my bloody bullies





A quick respond

And my mind was away


One doesn’t live with no buddies

One doesn’t survive with no body

When my mind was away

They were my body

Thanks to them

I survive the burying

But the bullying was always there


They were so close

They were so there

My eyes would never close

They were my never-ending fire

And I preferred it fire

Though inside I was burning


They were

I couldn’t help

But bear

The laughs

The glances

The fingers

And the unobvious smiley mouths

Nothing was void

Cause I was

Guyed at


About the author

Marie Cadette Pierre-Louis

This is me, Marie. A writer in becoming!

For now, I am a translator and content creator.

See more about me on Instagram (@mariecadettepierre) and twitter (@cadettelouis).

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  • C. H. Richardabout a month ago

    Wow, so relatable. Made me think of my own experience in vivid detail. Love this line " I only see eyes, And hear thousands laughs." ❤️❤️❤️

  • As a victim of bullying, this was so relatable!

  • The Dani Writer2 months ago

    Without a doubt, thoroughly, and absolutely enjoyed the heck outta this poem!

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