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Muffin Zombie

Bear or Gingerbread man

By Mariann CarrollPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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I love to bake

Especially Steak

I try to make a muffin man

That turn into a Zombie gingerbread man

Baking was a big mistake

( This is my first try at limerick)

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    🤣🤣👍👍

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    Hahaha this is hilarious Mariann.

  • This was so much fun! Looking forward to more limericks from youuuu!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Ha ha. Baking, u got company there.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    This is funny! ❤️

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    lol that was great ☺️

  • 🤣🤣Nice one👍😉

  • Hamza Shafiqabout a year ago

    Haha love the title

  • Sneha Pradhanabout a year ago

    Oof! Poor muffin man… adorable😊

  • Misty Raeabout a year ago

    A zombie muffin, LOL, love it!

  • Nikki Clamabout a year ago

    It was so funny and relatable, Great work :)

  • A zombie muffin, so funny

  • It's great to hear that you've written your first limerick, Mariann! I appreciate your effort in expressing your love for baking in a fun and creative way. Your limerick has a clear and structured rhyme scheme, which is a crucial element of this type of poem. However, the content of the poem is quite unique and unexpected, which makes it even more interesting. The idea of a muffin man turning into a zombie gingerbread man is both humorous and spooky, and it definitely grabs the reader's attention. I also appreciate your use of humor to express your frustration with baking. It's a relatable feeling for anyone who has had a kitchen mishap, and it makes the poem more engaging. Overall, I think you did a great job with your first limerick, Mariann! Your creativity and unique perspective are evident in your writing, and I hope you'll continue to explore your poetic talents. Keep writing and experimenting with different forms of poetry, and don't be afraid to take risks and try new things. Mariann, you can find an interesting take on the challenge at the following link: https://vocal.media/poets/the-world-of-absurdity. I encourage you to check it out and read through the poem. It's always helpful to see different interpretations and approaches to a challenge, and I think you'll enjoy reading this unique and creative piece. Thank you for sharing your work with us, and keep exploring the world of poetry!

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    Too cute! Poor muffin man. :(

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