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Mountain

A Haiku for Makaleha

By Ari GoldPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Your lava boiled black.

Though jungles soar on your peaks,

you too will be dust.

nature poetrysad poetry
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About the Creator

Ari Gold

Filmmaker, writer, drummer. Guinness World Record holder for air-drumming.

Poems published in Tablet Magazine: arigoldfilms.com/poems

Watch my movies on Amazon or at AriGoldFilms.com.

Follow on IG, Twitter: @AriGold

Drum podcast: HotSticks.fm

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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