Entrancing echos
create uplifting harmonies of long and short notes
lilting in unison before Luna darkens the day
Infinite birdsongs on breezes,
proposals in joyous song; listen now, before their
songs go to bed along with the confused
Egret who crouches in the reeds under this morning night
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Andrea Corwin
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This poem's news photos and subject will disturb many - read at your own discretion. The embedded article at the bottom is not "disturbing" other than the subject (there is a video link I did NOT preview within the embedded link, because I am disturbed enough by this event).
By Andrea Corwin 15 days ago in Poets
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Dear Andrea - May you be blessed with long legged plastic pink 'Egret-Flamingos' on your lawn; no watering needed. btw; Thanks for your kind comments; I'm back with vigor. Jj.in.l.a.
Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉
A birder friend in Texas saw the eclipse and said the birds stopped singing. Creative wording in your poem
Loved the focus on the eclipse effects for birds! And great title/line with “morning night”
I read Heather's poem awhile ago and learned what an egret is. So excited to see that you've written about an egret too! Loved your Acrostic!
A beautiful Acrostic poem from you!
Amazing poem! Your word choice is beautiful.
Beautiful!