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the clouds darken... but with better formatting

By mahd shahzadPublished about a year ago 1 min read
more rain
Photo by Michał Mancewicz on Unsplash

The clouds darken

I see it

I feel it

drip

drop

Tiny little droplets

come so far only to

splash

and dissolve into the remains of the rest of them

*

I think

I ponder

It clouds my brain

I zone out

*

crash

pour

*

The water wakes me up

I am drowning

but I think I like it

*

Am I a droplet too?

Wasting away my life

only to

drip

drop

like a tiny little droplet

that’s come so far

just to make a negligible little

splash

and dissolve into the remains of the rest?

*

I can’t see

The water hurts my eyes

I can’t feel

*

I let go

surreal poetry

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