I am rolling, rolling, rolling:
I am still.
I am rolling, rolling, rolling:
I am still.
Stop. Pull.
Tumbling blindly
Over and over.
*
I am a product of my travels,
One part of the strata,
Once a jagged flake of land,
Rough-hewn and snatched
From my bed - Rock.
My edges were sharp
And placed me in the wider scheme.
But I have changed.
I have been changed.
Forced to change.
Caught between liquid
And rough.
Pummelled and pushed,
Pulled and prodded,
The relentless battering
Has taken away my features
And all you can see now is
My smooth flat face.
*
I am a traveller,
A magician who appears
And disappears..
Today, I blend, nestled in a cluster,
With others who have
Endured.
Our tormentor has retreated
Ordered by his mistress
The moon
To let us rest.
We wait.
My face covered with weed,
My cheeks tickled by the feet of crustaceans
As I sit, helplessly static
And anticipate
The next salty assault.
*
Currently, I am sleek;
I gleam, polished,
The touch of my master's attention
Still on my skin
And I am obsidian,
Dark, wet, shiny.
Light will fall on me
And his touch will fade
Lifted,
Like mist.
My skin will be lighter
As the sun burns me:
Her captive.
She strips me to the reveal
And my undertraces emerge;
Images of white,
Freckles and speckles
And stripes
In the grey.
No longer slickened,
No longer thickened
With a jacket
Of brine.
*
I have heard tales of permanency.
A pink claw reaching
And removing:
Taken,
Away from the bright blue
And the uncertainty
Of certain tides.
*
Placed in a position by wood
As a supporting prop.
*
Dark loamy soil under a tree,
A face struggling to see
The light through the leaves
And a mask painted,
Smothering,
Of multicoloured acrylic:
Transformed from natural beauty
To a gaudy message of positivity
Or a ladybird, bee, other insect:
A convenient canvas for small hands.
*
In a glass case:
A collection
On a warm windowsill,
Gazing out through the clear
Unmoving surface.
Gravity held and pinned by other
Chosen companions
Picked from the sand
For their aestheticism.
*
Caught in warm, slavering jaws
Where sharp white daggers
Meat-smelly
Try and permeate
The hard exterior -
Some of us crack,
The pressure revealing
An unknown fissure
And the continued onslaught
Pierces and crushes and
Crumbles us to grit and dust
Covered in the slavering slathering
Of a different master.
*
I will diminish
By degrees
If I remain here.
But I do not know my fate.
I may not move today.
I may be thrown,
Deep.
I may be cracked against others.
I may feel the sole
Of a soul
As they pass over.
I may be taken and
Live forever
On a dressing table.
*
But perhaps more likely
I will stay
And be transformed
Beyond
Tangible recognition
Over ages into a grain.
Inexorable destiny.
I may get rubbed
Out of existence
A pebble no more
And I will be able
To run as I trickle
Through your hands.
***
There are few things smoother than a pebble. I love them. I find when I go to the beach that there is such a myriad of different stones that I revert to a childish urge to collect and scrutinise and examine and slip these little gems of nature into my pocket.
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Rachel Deeming
Mum, blogger, crafter, reviewer, writer, traveller: I love to write and I am not limited by form. Here, you will find stories, articles, opinion pieces, poems, all of which reflect me: who I am, what I love, what I feel, how I view things.
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Comments (5)
Very nuanced writing Rachel. Loved your use of metaphors throughout! Splendid!! 👏👏☺️
Great work!...So Powerful...love it...
Whoaaaa, what a journey! This made me feel so emotional for the pebble! Very well done!
I particularly loved the opening. I didn't read the title (who'd have thunk it!?) but I knew exactly what was going on. And then the realisation that erosion may be a freedom that preservation robs us of.
Holy crap! Powerful stuff. What a picture of a journey this presents. The parallels, of course, are there for humanity… but, this is beyond wonderful. Love it. 🥰💕🤙🏻