You are nothing without the Sun
You are only the reflection
Of the light of the Sun.
Will there be light at night
Without you reflecting
The sun.
Can we survive without you?
The Sun seem to be the power
Of the Universe.
Who give the Sun everlasting
Energy?
I ponder and wonder.
I am no sciencetist .
I just a curious soul
gaining life knowledge.
Every planet revolved
Around you.
Why do the planet magnetic
Around you, Sun?
I love to sing the song
“ Mr. Sun , Sun , Mr. Golden Sun ,
please shine down
On me.”
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Great work!
I wonder the same thing too! We're both curious about these things. Love this poem!