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Moon and Sun

by Mariann Carroll 2 months ago in art
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What a relationship

Moon and Sun
Photo by Mark Tegethoff on Unsplash

You are nothing without the Sun

You are only the reflection

Of the light of the Sun.

Will there be light at night

Without you reflecting

The sun.

Can we survive without you?

The Sun seem to be the power

Of the Universe.

Who give the Sun everlasting


I ponder and wonder.

I am no sciencetist .

I just a curious soul

gaining life knowledge.

Every planet revolved

Around you.

Why do the planet magnetic

Around you, Sun?

I love to sing the song

“ Mr. Sun , Sun , Mr. Golden Sun ,

please shine down

On me.”


About the author

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Dawn Saloisabout a month ago

    Great work!

  • I wonder the same thing too! We're both curious about these things. Love this poem!

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